Daddy's Caddy (Commercial Idea)

By Dr. Common Sense

A slightly graying middle aged man sits on the edge of his bed. He nervously glances at the clock, tapping his foot, wringing his hands as if pending a monumental decision.


Occasionally he looks to the door across from him [pan to door - light coming from beneath - back to man] He continues to look nervously between the clock and door.


[Camera move to door]: The light from underneath reveals the shadow of a person pacing back and forth behind the door. The door opens slowly and a woman emerges. She is staring blankly with her head slightly down showing a look of disbelief on her face. The man rises from his seated position on the edge of the bed; eyebrows raised, eyes open wide with look of anticipation overcoming him. The woman raises her head, eyes beginning to water and a large smile draws across her face. She slowly nods up and down at him.


They embrace.


[Camera zooms in on the man’s face] He grins joyfully, but his eyes tell a different story. His mind seems hard at work processing the reality of it all. He stares off into the distance as if recalling a memory...


[Flash to new scene] - Collection of clips play of the man and woman spiritedly carving through a canyon in a Chevrolet Corvette Z06.


[Flash back to bedroom] The woman pulls away a bit noticing his mixed emotions. She slowly reaches into the nightstand and pulls out what appears to be a magazine. Laying it on his chest between them, she leans up to his ear and whispers “Already ahead of you sweetheart”.


He slowly lowers the book from his chest [camera pans over the shoulder] and reveals an information pamphlet for the Cadillac CTS-V.


[Flash to scenes of CTS-V accelerating]


"Kids never looked so good".

 

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